Writing for love is a pas

oooooh. This was the best chapter yet! And Ailam was right. Skinny girls do like fat boys. I hate that word. fat. It's so inhumane. I prefer to call it ...

Ahh! Where's the next chapter? You can't leave me hangin' like that! I just sat at my computer for almost and hour and read all of the chapters and you ...

AHHH! Wher's the 8th chapter? You have to make this into a book. I'm in love. This is soo awesome, it's flat out...AWESOME! Ahh! I'm still geekin out about it. ...

Whoa. This was really dark. I think that you described the definition of black! Your use of words is really very good. The second stanza was my favorite. I think ...

Wow. I hope you keep all of those promises. It's really nice to see this from a guys point of view. It was really well written, but I do agree ...

Whoa. Aussie kinda summed it up for me, but I don't think you have any errors. I haven't really seen anyone write about this before, so I like it. I ...

Oooh. This is so nice in the beggining, then it gets sad. I think I cried. I didn't think that anything sounded cliche, which is good. The flow was even ...

Dancing, swirling, twirling, s pinning in a pool of light . Hidden, unknown and concealed, i n the deepest depths of night. Just take out some of the caps and ...

Wow. Okay, you have a lot of grammar issues going on in this, uhh, piece, I should say. Your 'i's' need capitalizing. You have some run-on sentences, too. When someone ...

Okay, as far as getting your feelings out, It's awesome. But I hate to say it, because I hate when other people say it, I scream, but where's the rhythm? ...

Whoa. I liked this story almost as much as my i-pod. Wierd. The plot was really good and the romantic drama was...Amazing! I love romantic drama. Umm, it was kinda ...

Oh my god. Dude, you are talented. This is one of your best stories yet, but the anticipation of it IS KILLING ME!! 10/10, just because the arguement was funny! ...

Your idea was simply ravishing. Although I didn't get the concept of it, I have yet to see anyone write a poem like this before. Very original. Some of the ...

Holy shit. I did not see that coming. Really really good plot and please keep writing. Please. It wsa a fast-slow pace that was very comfortable. Nice work on that. ...

I liked it and I didn't thin it was cliche either. Can you pm me when you write the next chapter, becuase i want to be the first to know. ...